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Im tired of telling you lies.
my soul laughs in ecstasy and cringes
when i notice the trust in your eyes.
You have no idea how beautiful
it is to break your will
your cries of torturous lust seem pitiful.
but i cant help but marvel at your skill.

I hate to love you.
I love to hate you.

Please, don't trust me.
But just a little more...
Im not what i seem
im practically at the door
to discovering your secret
behind your name
No regrets, not this time
we, my friend, are playing a dangerous game.

If you tell me your ultimate doom,
i will tell you mine.
for fate has brought us together, somehow..
but who death will befall first,
can only be told through time.

I hate to love you.

I love to hate you.
Light's thoughts. he wants to kill L so badly...(who wouldn't??? *cough*) but he hates that he's caught in a deadly trap.

saddening....

:heart: Light.
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Theglowingmoon Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
Tis a deadly trap he found himself in, sad so sad. poor kira-san
good poem :D once again my friend your poetry amazes
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AcerbusKeeper Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
it was off the top of my head. its not that good Xd
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Theglowingmoon Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
pff -patpat- i cant write poetry at all xD i can do short story things but not poems
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dotti55 Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2010
wow you're brave making a statement like that with soooo many L fans about.LOL!! I hate canon Light, although I feel he is the saddest victim in the whole Kira thing because of what could have been, but I love Light in most LxLight fanfiction including my own, where he is either tamed, gives it up for love of L and thus L never turns him in, forgets or never gets his hands on the damn thing in the first place.In other words, when he's the Light he so could have been had he not been taken over. In the fictions where they love and yet they still end up dead any way, those are the saddest and that appears to be the category in your poem. And by the way, it is epically written, it really is awesome and conveys everything Light must be feeling at that point. Excellent job.
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AcerbusKeeper Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
yea i enjoy a sad love. and yes, im brave XD i openly exclaimed it in my club (99% are L lovers) that i HATE L with a passion. and go glared/stared out. (of course, they made fun of me...telling me i was being angsty, cuz my nickname is Light/Kira...and my GF nick is L.... oxymoron >>) to me, L is kind of a douche.
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dotti55 Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2010
In a way, yea he is but being socially out of the loop he'd have to be. But at least he doesn't wantonly kill people to make himself happy and proclaim himself a god. But to each his own, that's the beauty of Death Note, they leave it to the readers/viewers to make up their own minds about who's side they wish to be on. I liked what Light did at the beginning, I would so do the same thing if I had my hands on a Death Note. However, when it became about him being a god and making up his own rules about who should die to suit him, it got out of hand. But I do understand his appeal. But I love L for many reasons, including his obvious dark side.

I'm sorry they made fun of you, you're entitled to your opinion and it's just as valid as mine over L. And maybe the poem was a bit angsty, but damn, all of Death Note is angsty. LOL. I still believe it was well done, and you should do more.
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AcerbusKeeper Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
he DID go a little overboard with being 'god' but i think he started to go crazy from killing people...nobody can go back to normal after killing another person...just look at murderers and soldiers >>' and yes, ive actually made a lot of poems LxL xD buried somewhere in the depths of my account.

and, it was all in good fun that they made fun of me. it wasn't anything serious, otherwise we'd all be dead from our opinions xP >>'
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dotti55 Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2010
Isn't that the truth. I'm glad it was good fun, coz sometimes around here, people are really very cruel.

I agree with what you say about people not being able to go back to normal after killing someone.
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